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Old 16-02-2005, 12:55 AM   #21
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I would like to tell everyone how much I enjoyed their writings. I've a profound passion for writen word and spoken pleasures. You've all writen beautifully. Heres my little bit. I've added a word cound in front of each paragraph.... wonderfull idea for a thread! I look forward to reading more from others.

Sleeping with the Earth

61 Rest no more, but sleep forever beneath me. Close your lids; Kiss the morning light and the things it grows goodbye. Hushed are the praises of morning birds within his ear. Thier songs can not breach the silence within, nor can their shape be seen. But can their shape be remembered? Can their song somehow remain within the dark that conquered?
40 A tree grows above the silent slumber of him that sleeps below. It gives its shade out of ignorance, but its hosts need for it has gone. No shade or refuge from the worms that stalk; he who sleeps alone.
49 Time progresses; things die and grow. The bird that once sang its song, rests with the man that sleeps below. And all of the earth is quite, waiting for what may come. It turns in space engaged in silent dance with its sister stars. In darkness, it too sleeps alone.
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Old 16-02-2005, 02:01 AM   #22
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Ooh. *applaud* k:
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Old 16-02-2005, 04:33 PM   #23
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Illsmouth

I walk through the town
Yet there's no one around
I looked in the hotel,
the general store too
Having to search for the townsfolk
is making me awfully tired
it is making me tired and blue
All niceness in this town is gone
As if some shadow hanging over
has not spared one living person
not noone, not one
The all of a sudden,
running out to sea
I spy a lonely drifter
One who appearred
Appearred right before me
He was ugly and grotesque
of what lineage I do not know
Some half fish half man hybrid
Something made of all the ages woe
I see him briskly running
out to something in the sea
I find myself also running
running out to meet him in the sea
ever so briskly
I do not know what cloud is in my mind
for what it is I cannot tell
but I am briskly running
to my well
my sanctuary
my chamber in the sea
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Old 16-02-2005, 08:38 PM   #24
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@Six
There´s something there...
Within the text,
That just, hypnotizes somehow...

Nice to have you along,

@Faw
You have have an intriguingly good talent in those,
(Well, as it seems your intrest in Cthulhu, is it a wonder?)

Ever considered a verbal contributions thread of your own,
one such as Tai has?
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Old 16-02-2005, 08:57 PM   #25
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Um, thanks. I dunno if I should make a verbal contributions, but I guess I'll think about it. I dunno though. I might contribute a bit to the Abandonia Writing Society though.
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Old 16-02-2005, 10:29 PM   #26
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Hmm, I started writitng poetry back in the primary school - you know, gone through a lot in that time, found the paper to share my secrets with, but it wasn't anything much - just as long as it rhymed :whistle:
Then I did a Sonnet for my English professor in the 1st year of the University - it was in a way an assigment,.
During that period of my life I also found Seb and completelly stopped writitng - not that I was any good in it.... I guess I found what I was looking for. :angel: People told me to start again, since Seb and I were in a literary group and I did, but it didn't seem right, maybe one day, I will do it again, but untill then - I have your and Seb's work to enjoy! Thanx for that!

Here is that sonnet:


I don't want friends who are stupid and bored
Therefore you are not my friend anymore.
Just stand up and walk through my yellow door.
Else you will get a conviction from court.

And now I sit alone and wonder why
I knew not what I was doing back then
That is the reason why it had to end.
A knock on my door has ended my sigh.

I opened the door, he was standing there.
With tears in his eyes he promised me this:
"I will change" and confirmed it with a loss.
With a smile on my face I touched his hair.

"These words I have heard so often before!"
And violently shut in his face my door.
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Old 17-02-2005, 01:17 AM   #27
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Thanks Wael!

@rainwife

Love the flow of each verse... was a pleasure to read!

@faw

You have great writing abilities also, do you right poetic verse often?
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Old 18-02-2005, 01:26 PM   #28
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Quote:
Originally posted by rainwife@Feb 17 2005, 12:29 AM

I don't want friends who are stupid and bored
Therefore you are not my friend anymore.
Just stand up and walk through my yellow door.
Else you will get a conviction from court.

And now I sit alone and wonder why
I knew not what I was doing back then
That is the reason why it had to end.
A knock on my door has ended my sigh.

I opened the door, he was standing there.
With tears in his eyes he promised me this:
"I will change" and confirmed it with a loss.
With a smile on my face I touched his hair.

"These words I have heard so often before!"
And violently shut in his face my door.
LOL Now that's mean!
Very good sonnet, too bad you don't have more to post...
                       
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Old 18-02-2005, 03:29 PM   #29
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well, not often, but usually when I'm in a writing mood.
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Old 18-02-2005, 05:08 PM   #30
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Though I meant Rainwife with that, yours was also pretty interesting to read. I hope more will come soon. k:
                       
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