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[Kon-Tiki]

Not to mention you drew the black rectangle on top of the texture, bringing it out in front even more.

[Luchsen]

Originally posted by taikara@Mar 29 2005, 09:20 PM
I hope you don't take this too offensively, it's meant to help more than anything else. But, this is the longest and most complex critique I've given in the art forum, so go you k:

No, I don't. I also don't like it. It was only a fast, rough work thought as a joke. But I noticed that I could (and maybe will) make more out of this idea. Thanks for your critique so I have clues for working with it. k:

[Luchsen]

Originally posted by Kon-Tiki@Mar 29 2005, 09:26 PM
Not to mention you drew the black rectangle on top of the texture, bringing it out in front even more.

:blink:

[Luchsen]

Here is high jump:

[Strobe]

about the nude version above... i know, i asked for it, but i haven't expected that
you really give it a try anyway...i appreciate the effort, however i have
to agree with tai and kon-tiki. but as you mentioned, that you have a remake of
this in mind, i'm looking forward to this...but remember: not too much nutidity on
abandonia

as for the high jump, i can't see a big difference between those pics, except the
first one's slightly darker than the second. maybe you could try some other filters
or experiment on colouring a little bit?

other than this...nice stuff, luchsen !

[TaloN]

i love your style man, your using the fitlers in PS in a new and interesting way, altering it yourself rather than just running a few filters. love the new one.

[Luchsen]

Originally posted by Strobe@Mar 31 2005, 10:44 AM
as for the high jump, i can't see a big difference between those pics, except the
first one's slightly darker than the second. maybe you could try some other filters
or experiment on colouring a little bit?

I know, I know... Couldn't decide between the pictures because they are so similar (I like the brighter complexion more but the contrast to the bar is not so good). For the colouring: I should slow down a bit so that I have more time to colour around here a bit and there a bit and... :angel:

[taikara]

About the high jump... I prefer the lighter one, but something I noticed, some of the tiles (you used the tile filter, right?) are randomly off-color(the green in the right shoe?), probably due to the shading in those areas, giving tiny lack of consistency.

But still, it's a very cool idea, I like it, and keep up the good work k:

[Luchsen]

There is the green in the shoe.

[taikara]

Did you do this one, or is this a resource pic?