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To me they're more like someone's boiling inside, wailing their lungs out, finally collapsing with the disappointment in the last verse, if you know what I mean.[/b]
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Exactly! I told you it's not finished yet, but I saw that in yer poem too
k: I myself is kinda poetry liking man, so I know exactly what you are talking about. What I'm doing now is to try to brake down the song to a more managable sizes, and add spaces between the verses. I try to add some new percussion melodies to the latter parts and think of some cool pads under the whole thing.
As for the singing, just as you said. Don't you see the dichtihomy there? Starting out in a low whispery voice, but strong breath, you know like someone get pushed to the edge, and getting stronger with each verse, and the end verses is a low voice yelling...like...you know I can't actually sing, I have a voice of a vacuum cleaner, but I try to record a bit of your poem to show you what I'm talking about. I guess you will like it.
As for those notes: huh?
I mean I tHOUGHT I can read chords and stuff, but I'm not sure about this one. I can mostly read scheetmusic but this is different. I'll try to decode it nonetheless
k:
I'll be back in the evening with some results
