08-02-2005, 10:06 PM | #1 | ||
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I want you people's comments (*cough* constructive criticism *cough*)
http://www.rokk.is/default.asp?Flytjandi_I...da=um_flytjanda* *You download the song by clicking "Swallow" |
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08-02-2005, 11:55 PM | #2 | ||
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Sounds pretty good actually. For constructive critisism I would say:
* At the start, the guitar needs to keep on the beat (not slow down). It only does it slightly. * In the verse(?) the vocals get a bit out of tune. As well as near the start. I can't hear anything wrong with the bass Also this proably should have been put in the Music Forum. |
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09-02-2005, 02:51 PM | #3 | ||
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later I'll move it. |
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09-02-2005, 03:24 PM | #4 | ||
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later I'll move it. [/b][/quote] Nope... I think it belongs in music :angel:
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10-02-2005, 02:42 AM | #5 | ||
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Come on guys... listen to it and give an opinion. It is a good song, and I'd like to hear more.
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10-02-2005, 04:19 AM | #6 | ||
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Yeah there isn't anything wrong with the music, but Auhsor's right the vocals aren't great.
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10-02-2005, 12:12 PM | #7 | ||
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