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Old 10-07-2005, 11:22 AM   #31
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i really dig your combination of poetry and art! as for the latest contribution, i'd
suggest you make the words more readable, since the color contrast you've
used is quite hard to read. anyway, your basic idea is fine, so i'm really looking
forward to more stuff like that! k:
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Old 29-07-2005, 05:35 PM   #32
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Also hanging in the art corner are some of my photographs:




This is a poster design I made for an school assignment once. We had visited a absurdistic play called GAGA and were assigned to make a poster for it. This one ca3me out pretty good actually.
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Old 30-07-2005, 11:05 AM   #33
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Good job!

It's a bit "simple" but very professional

I think you received, for that, a good valutation by your teacher k:
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Old 30-07-2005, 01:29 PM   #34
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It recieved a 8.5 (out of 10), so yes
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Old 16-08-2005, 10:28 PM   #35
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Allright you guys, I want your opinions on this one.

I'm doing a series of phtoto's about railway surroundings by dawn\night

What approach do you like best:

The dramatic approach:


or

The more realistic approach:


or

The realistic with more contrast approach:


any other suggestions are welcome as well, thanks
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Old 16-08-2005, 10:42 PM   #36
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My entirely personal and totaly void of artistic sense opinion would be:
The dramatic approach.

I like the picture. The little white thingey doesn't entirely seem to fit in, though.
EDIT: Or, more like it's stands out a bit.
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Old 16-08-2005, 10:55 PM   #37
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I agree with Doubler.

The dramatic approach is best. The colours are so much richer.

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Old 17-08-2005, 12:27 AM   #38
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Just don't over contrast it. You don't want the orange to turn red k:
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Old 17-08-2005, 06:10 AM   #39
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Yeah that's kinda why I'm in doubt, I like the red\orange light better on the second version and it does have a bit more authenticy in it's style (I think). Anyway, keep them comments coming, I haven't decided yet k:

The small white dot is the light of a crane by the way, maybe I should remove that indeed, tnx
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Allright, the dramatic approach it is then

Here's the second one:

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