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Old 07-07-2011, 10:52 AM   #1
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Default Abandoned Witch's poems about Arete

Abandoned Witch here.
It is my collection of poems about Arete, and other things as well.
I've used to write poems since I was young.

Here are some of them.

Oh lovely Arete

Oh my dearie, my Arete
I'll never leave you forever
You are so precious to me
How I wish you are so known to see.

You are so very pretty
You are so very lovely
I wish you were here holding a crystal ball
I finally have seen you with Fifth once and for all.

Now on to the real poems I wrote.

My own point of view of Arete

Arete's hair is dyed in red so fair
So deep it covered only her hair
Then she kept her things
in a box that she knows everything.

Her hair is so very long It doesn't really hurt
She wears a witchdress with a frilled skirt
Her friends wanted to meet her
I'll give her flowers to offer.

Months passed, and nobody liked
until Fifth, which turns out right,
became her lover and friend
and her love story doesn't end.

She had a loving heart
and knows where love and relationship starts
As this ends, I'll say one more thing
With all my heart I'll give my friends my everything.
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Old 07-07-2011, 11:13 AM   #2
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You're a very talented poet, AW. Keep up the good work! I'd like to see your works in other themes as well.

EDIT: I mean, I want to see more poems about staff members
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Old 07-07-2011, 11:24 AM   #3
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Old 07-07-2011, 11:29 AM   #4
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Old 07-07-2011, 05:47 PM   #5
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kinda odd and somewhat disturbing. I'm not only talking about the Llama.

my guess: Abandoned Witch -> another fat, naked and not to forget hairy man in front of a computer xD
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Old 07-07-2011, 07:01 PM   #6
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kinda odd and somewhat disturbing. I'm not only talking about the Llama.

my guess: Abandoned Witch -> another fat, naked and not to forget hairy man in front of a computer xD
I guess I have to agree. The poems are a bit... disturbing. But not bad.
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Old 07-07-2011, 08:07 PM   #7
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Aaaw come on, don't be cruel.
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Old 07-07-2011, 09:37 PM   #8
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ok, I have to admit that this statement wasn't very emphatic of me.

sorry for that (and the mental picture).

I like following lines:

"As this ends, I'll say one more thing
With all my heart I'll give my friends my everything."

A very compassionate ending.

But I'm also a bit worried from a psychological pov.

Nonetheless, as someone who also writes, I say: Artistic expression FTW!
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Old 08-07-2011, 08:43 AM   #9
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At least he (?) drew some attention. And that's not that easy, you know. I strongly encourage AW to write more poems.
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Old 05-12-2011, 12:11 PM   #10
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I have waited a long time posting in this Arete-themed poems thread, so here's a new one:

Why I always adore Arete

I had waited a long time following you
and I know your grace is true
I was once only a dreamer
but someone earned me respect to become better.

My dearie Arete, my loving dame princess of red
I am following you since I joined the site
Why I am so touched by your love, I'll leave my worries
I wont say any words to describe your love, honor and glory

Once in my life I'd never wait for forever to see you
Hy heart is all that I know to get to know you're fine
All the times you're with Fifth remind me of my true love
and the times that we were friends that never broken once.

I wish you were a symbol of truth
that will never change till the end of our route
Becoming an ambitious girl has more to know everything
has a way to really start something.

Our future will rise when you tie your hair
We have a choice to make it fair
The end is totally near when I see anyone
I give my friends my Witchy Stardust!

~End~
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