07-02-2005, 08:49 PM | #11 | ||
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For those who like things that rhyme...
Prayer © A long, long time ago... est 1994 Crystal green exuberance, Deadened by despair. He wished, he hoped, he loved, he lost - And now, he's solitaire. In the window of his mind, He saw the blackness of alone, But in the blindness of his trance, He noticed not the light she shone. Flaming red in spirit, Yet knows not what she feels. Never remembering what she lost Nor strengths that she could wield. Purest innocence was ripped to shreds She had no thoughts of love again. For the longest time that she has known, She's paid for another's sin. Thrown together, in a mix For trying to stop the pain. Trying not to fall into the darkness, The insane. She travelled down a path she's known But only once has been - And in the mirror of his soul, She found her heart again. |
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08-02-2005, 12:18 AM | #12 | ||
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again, you've provide a great piece of poetry...ehm, i'm sorry, i mean "rhyme" :whistle:
but what's the difference anyway, rhyme...poetry - in both cases it's impressive verbal art! i wish i could handle the english language like you do, then i'd give some poems a try, too. of course such texts can be done in german as well, but in my opinion, english has a more attracting melody, somehow! you are a very interesting person, telling that from the artworks you've provided so far - both, visual and verbal. |
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08-02-2005, 12:27 AM | #13 | ||
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Those 2 pieces are simply beautiful. I too wish I could handle English as taikara does.. Tai, where are you from? :blink: |
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08-02-2005, 12:37 AM | #14 | ||
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@TheVoid: It's a secret. :bleh: I'm just teasing, but I'll let you guess before I tell you, though. I'm curious to see what people think. Thank you both for your kind words |
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08-02-2005, 12:40 AM | #15 | ||
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08-02-2005, 01:14 AM | #17 | ||
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hm, ok, i think i caught your drift.... :angel:
if i may join the guessing about your origin, tai, i'd go for: usa |
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08-02-2005, 01:18 AM | #18 | ||
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Geez, you're good.
It took Puffin two tries. I won't talk about TheVoid. I live in Florida. Right next to Disney. Sigh. I hate it here. |
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08-02-2005, 01:23 AM | #19 | ||
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But you shouldn't be so embarrassed :blink: I'd like to pay a visit there, tho I hate Mickey Mouse. But Goofy is cool. Not to mention Carl Barks and his work |
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08-02-2005, 01:40 AM | #20 | ||
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Don't feel bad. It took you the longest to guess, but you guessed some of my favorite countries.
It would be nice to be from Ireland. Sigh. |
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