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[The_EgAt]

I want you people's comments (*cough* constructive criticism *cough*)

http://www.rokk.is/default.asp?Flytjandi_I...da=um_flytjanda*

*You download the song by clicking "Swallow"

[auhsor]

Sounds pretty good actually. For constructive critisism I would say:
* At the start, the guitar needs to keep on the beat (not slow down). It only does it slightly.
* In the verse(?) the vocals get a bit out of tune. As well as near the start.

I can't hear anything wrong with the bass
Also this proably should have been put in the Music Forum.

[TheVoid]

Originally posted by auhsor@Feb 9 2005, 01:55 AM
Also this proably should have been put in the Music Forum.

Oh, I think it should stay here for a while (more visits in the blah blah section).

later I'll move it.

[wormpaul]

Originally posted by TheVoid+Feb 9 2005, 03:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TheVoid @ Feb 9 2005, 03:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-auhsor@Feb 9 2005, 01:55 AM
Also this proably should have been put in the Music Forum.

Oh, I think it should stay here for a while (more visits in the blah blah section).

later I'll move it. [/b][/quote]
Nope...

I think it belongs in music :angel:

[auhsor]

Come on guys... listen to it and give an opinion. It is a good song, and I'd like to hear more.

[Iron_Scarecrow]

Yeah there isn't anything wrong with the music, but Auhsor's right the vocals aren't great.

[Omuletzu]

Originally posted by The_EgAt@Feb 9 2005, 01:06 AM
I want you people's comments (*cough* constructive criticism *cough*)

http://www.rokk.is/default.asp?Flytjandi_I...da=um_flytjanda*

*You download the song by clicking "Swallow"

The instrumental part is great, if you get my drift....