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Old 02-12-2006, 04:28 PM   #1
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So, it`s time for some poetry.

An exersise for your creative minds, and a chance to create an AB folklore

The rules are simple - everything you post must rhyme with the previous lines, and it`s context, so that our poem will (at least a litlle bit) make some sense. Make sure that you catch the rhythm too. It will sound better.


I`ll start, to get the things started:

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<div align="center">-The Poem-</div>

<div align="center">
When I look into your eyes, a star makes a blink,
I shiver like a leaf in fall, my boat`s gonna sink.
Is this beaty all for real, is my boat realy sinking,
or am I just too drunk again to do some propper thinking.

Before you kiss me, my true love, I want to make it clear,
that this will keep on going if you buy me another beer.

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<div align="right">...it`s your turn to continue </div>
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Old 02-12-2006, 04:32 PM   #2
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ehh...

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When I close my eyes, I see a star.
A star that is so bright it could destroy the world.
It brings war.
The star came from another world.
War is coming with a star.
Star is bringing war.
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What do you think?
I think it was good...
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Old 02-12-2006, 05:49 PM   #3
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not bad, but please stick tothe main structure, so that the poem will continue in one rhythm
Quote:
<div align="center">When I look into your eyes, a star makes a blink,
I shiver like a leaf in fall, my boat`s gonna sink.
Is this beaty all for real, is my boat realy sinking,
or am I just too drunk again to do some propper thinking.

Before you kiss me, my true love, I want to make it clear,
that this will keep on going if you buy me another beer.
[/b][/quote]

to fit in with this
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Old 02-12-2006, 06:04 PM   #4
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Oh, sorry!
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Old 02-12-2006, 06:11 PM   #5
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There once was a girl from Ealing
Who had a peculiar feeling
She lay on her back, and opened her crack
And p*ssed all over the ceiling.

Sorry, couldn't resist0rz.

PS:I did not steal that from Bridget Jones' Diary. Hugh Grant stole it from ME.
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Old 02-12-2006, 06:13 PM   #6
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(inspired by Tom Lehrer's I Hold Your Hand In Mine)

I hold your hand in mine, dear, give it a gently kiss
I hold your hand in mine, dear, but the rest of you I miss
Our love is only partial, and though that may not be a sin
taking it literally qualified for the loonie bin
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Old 03-12-2006, 03:18 AM   #7
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Mighty Midget, you have an appreciation for Tom Lehrer?!

*swoons*

So with that beer in my belly
an' your mangled parts in my drawer,
I wish that our time together could've been so much more.

I love you I love you, despite all our past woes
I yearn for that happy time (now gone) when we came to blows.
Your mother had said that we wouldn't make it past Christmas,
But when I showed her my shotgun she knew I meant business...

(sorry for the creepy vibe, but The Mighty Midget got me going all "Porphyria's Lover" after his contribution )
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Old 03-12-2006, 11:03 AM   #8
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*sings* rickety-tickety-tin k: and a nice ( :blink: ) follow-up too, I might add. That Porphyria's Lover is pretty wicked LOL

Your dad said "What? Say, are you mad?"
't was the greatest shock he ever had
to realize that yes, 't was true
that this was something one could do

To point a gun at a mother's head
a new idea he contemplated
If trigger was pulled, he wouldn't care, he'd
run off with his secretary
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Old 04-12-2006, 07:27 AM   #9
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So with a gun at her brow, your mother relented.
We were married in spring,
'Though your Father was mad, 'cos his wallet was dented.

That day was so wonderful,
You looked so fine and so sweet -
Our guests thought I was joking
When I said you looked "good enough to eat..."
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Old 04-12-2006, 08:21 AM   #10
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With a fork in my hand and a gleam in my eyes
I caught you not enirely by supprise
A precious moment we wished not to hurry
when I covered you, head to toe, in red curry

Our guests where bewildered and eyed for an exit
And guests leaving weddings certainly wrecks it
You brushed off the curry, I laid the fork resting
as we tried to assure them that we're only jesting
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