Go Back   Forums > Community Chatterbox > Blah, blah, blah...
Memberlist Forum Rules Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
Search Forums:
Click here to use Advanced Search

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 08-02-2005, 10:06 PM   #1
The_EgAt
Abandonia nerd

 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Hofudborgarsvadi, Iceland
Posts: 74
Default

I want you people's comments (*cough* constructive criticism *cough*)

http://www.rokk.is/default.asp?Flytjandi_I...da=um_flytjanda*

*You download the song by clicking "Swallow"
The_EgAt is offline                         Send a private message to The_EgAt
Reply With Quote
Old 08-02-2005, 11:55 PM   #2
auhsor
Super Freak

 
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: ,
Posts: 189
Default

Sounds pretty good actually. For constructive critisism I would say:
* At the start, the guitar needs to keep on the beat (not slow down). It only does it slightly.
* In the verse(?) the vocals get a bit out of tune. As well as near the start.

I can't hear anything wrong with the bass
Also this proably should have been put in the Music Forum.
auhsor is offline                         Send a private message to auhsor
Reply With Quote
Old 09-02-2005, 02:51 PM   #3
TheVoid
Home Sweet Abandonia

 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Shella, Kenya
Posts: 968
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by auhsor@Feb 9 2005, 01:55 AM
Also this proably should have been put in the Music Forum.
Oh, I think it should stay here for a while (more visits in the blah blah section).

later I'll move it.
TheVoid is offline                         Send a private message to TheVoid
Reply With Quote
Old 09-02-2005, 03:24 PM   #4
wormpaul
10 GOSUB Abandonia
20 GOTO 10
 
wormpaul's Avatar

 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Shella, Kenya
Posts: 1,943
Send a message via MSN to wormpaul Send a message via Yahoo to wormpaul
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by TheVoid+Feb 9 2005, 03:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TheVoid @ Feb 9 2005, 03:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-auhsor@Feb 9 2005, 01:55 AM
Also this proably should have been put in the Music Forum.
Oh, I think it should stay here for a while (more visits in the blah blah section).

later I'll move it. [/b][/quote]
Nope...

I think it belongs in music :angel:
__________________
i jus luv abandonia!!
wormpaul is offline                         Send a private message to wormpaul
Reply With Quote
Old 10-02-2005, 02:42 AM   #5
auhsor
Super Freak

 
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: ,
Posts: 189
Default

Come on guys... listen to it and give an opinion. It is a good song, and I'd like to hear more.
auhsor is offline                         Send a private message to auhsor
Reply With Quote
Old 10-02-2005, 04:19 AM   #6
Iron_Scarecrow
Home Sweet Abandonia

 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: ,
Posts: 1,390
Default

Yeah there isn't anything wrong with the music, but Auhsor's right the vocals aren't great.
Iron_Scarecrow is offline                         Send a private message to Iron_Scarecrow
Reply With Quote
Old 10-02-2005, 12:12 PM   #7
Omuletzu
10 GOSUB Abandonia
20 GOTO 10

 
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Shella, Kenya
Posts: 1,529
Send a message via MSN to Omuletzu Send a message via Yahoo to Omuletzu
Default

Quote:
Originally posted by The_EgAt@Feb 9 2005, 01:06 AM
I want you people's comments (*cough* constructive criticism *cough*)

http://www.rokk.is/default.asp?Flytjandi_I...da=um_flytjanda*

*You download the song by clicking "Swallow"
The instrumental part is great, if you get my drift....
Omuletzu is offline                         Send a private message to Omuletzu
Reply With Quote
Reply


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Looking For A Song Sebatianos Music, Art, Movies 2 13-02-2006 12:18 PM
A Song. Nick Music, Art, Movies 5 07-03-2005 09:24 AM
A Song From Me FreeFreddy Music, Art, Movies 23 02-03-2005 04:35 PM
Please Tell Me The Name Of This Song Tulac Music, Art, Movies 6 25-02-2005 08:08 AM
One Song Pharaoh Blah, blah, blah... 28 08-02-2005 07:50 AM

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump
 


The current time is 01:34 PM (GMT)

 
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.