18-08-2005, 02:48 PM | #11 | ||
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Doubler or poems are very interesting, you have style to wrote poems, try another topic, not so dark. k:
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19-08-2005, 10:08 PM | #12 | ||
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hey, nice poems.... i don' t undestand much about poetry, so my compliment might not be as worthy as if it was made by an "expert". about your "Ten tears" poem, i think you should also mention the fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth and nineth tears :evil:
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20-08-2005, 09:10 AM | #13 | ||
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@Little Fish: Thanks , I'll see if I can post something less dark soon
@Shrek: Thanks, all opinions are pretty much equal in my idea, I don't know anything about poetry myself Take another look at those ten tears , as they don't come one by one (except the first, that is). Actually a bit of a, errr... Quality - quantity kind of thing (can't really explain it better)
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21-08-2005, 08:09 PM | #14 | ||
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ok, i got it (1+2+3+4=10 - if my math is ok) k: - by the way, you are waisting two tears with your pity for yourself, only be pity for the cool things you could have done but by some stupid reason haven' t done.
and don' t worry about writing "dark" poetry, because the best part is always dark - that' s the beauty of it (one of my teatchers said something like this once: "if everything in life was easy, life would be so boring" :evil: ) keep writting, we' ll keep reading :Titan: |
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21-08-2005, 08:11 PM | #15 | ||
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Somebody should Illustrate your poems.
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22-08-2005, 10:28 AM | #16 | ||
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@Shrek: As said, I write what I need to get out. Notice the word 'reluctantly'? Sometimes it's difficult to avoid...
@Magic: I'll leave them open to different interpretations for now. But if you want to know something ask away @All: Í'm leaving for a week or so. I'll update again when I get back And thanks for all the supportive comments :tnx:
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30-08-2005, 11:59 AM | #17 | ||
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Well, I'm back :bye:
These two are a bit different. Please forgive me, but I felt they had to be posted for a complete picture Quote:
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As such I think some clarification might be in order: The first one is a very visual description of a dream, one dreamt at night as well as one cherished The second one I wrote when facing a pretty important moment where I really had to prove my worth. I had quite a few doubts about whether it would go well. It's good to be back -Doubler
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30-08-2005, 04:55 PM | #18 | ||
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I like them, especially the first one. Keep it up, Doubler k:
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30-08-2005, 08:18 PM | #19 | ||
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Yeah I like the style you use for your writing, they both are pretty good, keep up the good work. k:
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04-09-2005, 10:09 AM | #20 | ||
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Thanks people
With school beginning tommorow, I just thought I'd post this. Quote:
-Doubler
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