09-08-2005, 10:03 PM | #11 | ||
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I like your work too, Taikara. k: I made a prose like my poetry for those who don't like poems. |
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09-08-2005, 10:45 PM | #12 | ||
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Attempting to introduce Poe's metrics into mine:
Scrooge Deary Scrooge I once was My very own dream within a dream From the open window, ghosts they came and lighted my room with their gleam. The first shadow did not speak, yet it comforted me with his pure eyes His past reminisced, or was it mine? with the beauty of a thousand skies... Those eyes I should have known Many years before were my own But they faded... Distant voices, sick and jaded A Chopin's prelude from my right My garden gates my guide invaded, thoughtless I headed to the light Open window still, the specter flied Mumbling reached my ears as I drew nearer Slowly understanding the visitor as my vision became clearer And the future shade it came and sent me where the season was still the same One day after my burial day, where tomorrow was only yesterday. My cold home the tenuous spirit shown; Blood marks still on the room's floor Where a tainted blanket was left alone And the future was no more |
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10-08-2005, 01:50 AM | #13 | ||
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Ég v?ri til í
a? skilja heiminn ég v?ri til í a? skilja öll heimsins mál ég v?ri til í a? skilja ?ig ég v?ri til í a? skilja mig. En hva? ef ég skildi heiminn? hva? ef ég skildi öll heimsins mál? hva? ef ég skildi ?ig? og mig? v?ri lífi? eitthva? betra? I won a price for that once, got it published and stuff.. |
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10-08-2005, 03:15 PM | #14 | ||
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I wish I spoke icelandic, Puffin k:
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15-08-2005, 09:52 PM | #15 | ||
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Here's another poem (s).
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25-11-2005, 06:17 PM | #18 | ||
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Pretty nice Wazzup k:
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23-01-2006, 02:52 PM | #19 | ||
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With each new day, tomorrow shall soon fade away....
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26-01-2006, 09:44 AM | #20 | ||
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I didn´t think you have such talent.. :w00t:
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