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[Mighty Midget]

That's the problem, see. By adding a chorus, it loses that poem-style I want and instead ends up as an "ordinary song", second it breaks up the pace and the continuity in the verses. Thirdly, it simply would become too long. So sorry, I really don't want a chorus on this one.

Instead of pairing the verses up, they could come "on a line", so to speak, but only if the melody and mood progression makes it interesting. This is more what I'm looking for, really.

EDIT: Here's some examples of "Stones": http://www.joxter.net/