Maybe I'm strange, but looking to the book, my eyes go looking to the greek words, and definitely not to the focus point you signed (and however he made many other pictures without the bees and just the censored book words).
Looking out of my window I see a building: the same lines you drawed... it should be art!! :bleh: (ok, i'm joking, but I said you don't have to consider the photo, but the real wrapped building itself: that's only a concept!)
The Griffa's one is again quite only a concept about the painting: it was a message to the painters of it's times (60-70) to start again painting from canvas and coluors (that's after Fontana's cuts and other things like that)
I know you said something right, but I hope you'll be able to be even less strict. And excuse me if sometimes I say some stupid things: you know, I'm an artist!
But wasn't the "guitar" your final exam work?
