not bad, but please stick tothe main structure, so that the poem will continue in one rhythm
Quote:
<div align="center">When I look into your eyes, a star makes a blink,
I shiver like a leaf in fall, my boat`s gonna sink.
Is this beaty all for real, is my boat realy sinking,
or am I just too drunk again to do some propper thinking.
Before you kiss me, my true love, I want to make it clear,
that this will keep on going if you buy me another beer.
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to fit in with this
