My Immortal
 

NOT FOR YOUNGER PEOPLE. I GAVE YOU ALL A FAIR WARNING



A Fan fic. Voted worst Fan Fic to ever exist, and thats saying something. There are things like half life: Full life consequences, but those are meant to be funny...this one is just....good LORD! Its a fan fic that squashes everything the world loves about harry potter into the ground, spits on it, defecates on it, and then makes love to it in a mud bath... and then some! Its made by a gothic/emo girl known as Tara Gilesbie in real life, and XXXbloodyrists666XXX on ff.net.

WARNING THOUGH: THE FAN FIC (TRIES AND FAILS) CONTAINS (IF YOU CAN CALL IT THAT) MAJOR (CRAPPY) SEXUALITY AND SEXUAL THEMES (PFFT) AND IS NOT RECOMMENDED FOR (ANYONE) PEOPLE UNDER THE LEGAL AGE OF CONSENT IN YOUR COUNTRY, OR IF YOUR MOMS BEHIND YOU.

The main reason it was so horrible is the fact she has not knowledge of knowledgeable grammar or spelling AT ALL. she couldn't right a complete sentence to save her LIFE, and the fact she constantly uses OOC and net chat works in her writings





Among the constant OOC chat in her fanfic is the constant complete garbage in her actual fanfic herself. Sex, drugs, sex recording, sex watching, dumbledore swearing,

(spoiler contains a swear)


SERIOUSLY. GOOD CHARLOTTE and Hogwarts?

WARNING: The following is rated R. Seriously mods, im giving people fair warnings :)


her excuse to the fact dumbedore swore was that he had a "Headache"



That was another thing she did, she threatened to end her fanfic unless she actually had support...her account got hijacked later by another person, near chapter 39 of her 44 chapter Epic, and the person actually made a decent ending to my understanding, and all that...but...yea... (fail)

anyways she reaquired her account and wrote a new ending...heres the final chapter of My Immortal

seriously i dont recomend younger viewers read this at all


My most favourite quotes are in this chapter. The "“I know a four-letter word 4 dirt, CRUCIATUS!!!” and "“U guyz are in a Latin stand-of!!!!!!!111”



Seriously though, time for an actual review. This fan fic is a disgrace to actual decent fanfictioners. Actually, its just a disgrace to even people who arnt good! There arnt words to describe how many moral grounds the author broke when writing this piece of crap! While she got millions of views because people were in it for the lulz, good writers got nothing.

Verdict


if you wanna look at this yourself, go ahead. Its so bad its hilarious :D

I thought you were reviewing the song. :p

I can feel only a subtle difference from the original HP saga. :rolleyes:

Oh my God...

Either somebody links the dramatic readings of this or I close the thread :p

Translation: Watch the dramatic readings of this.

It's poetic, really.

the girl that made this must have been high on crack at the time methinks

isn't it joke?

also, my favorite quote

Haha. That was fricking hilarious. LOL

Sadly, no. The girl who made it is just..that bad!

Also LOL at the quote. This story is full of MAGICKS!